Bodybuilding video trailer with Jay Cutler

Sorry, i forgot the .htm at the end

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Hello, I am trying to get some public opinions on a video trailer that
I have created for World Gym. They will be playing it at the Gym to
promote a bodybuilding show in Biloxi, MS next month, to include
prejudge, show, Jay Cutler seminar.

Any comments about the video are welcome, please email.

The trailer is located at http://www.dvmemories.us/demos.htm

Thanks,
Eric
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If the purpose of this video is to bore the viewer to death, you've done
well. If you're trying to sell something, make it less than 1 minute, and
cut out that 2 minute still photo of the poster at the beginning. You need
to learn how to compose a video, dude. You've managed to make a dynamic
event into something boring.

"dvmemoriesvideo" <video DeleteThis @dvmemories.us> wrote in message
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> Hello, I am trying to get some public opinions on a video trailer that
> I have created for World Gym. They will be playing it at the Gym to
> promote a bodybuilding show in Biloxi, MS next month, to include
> prejudge, show, Jay Cutler seminar.
>
> Any comments about the video are welcome, please email.
>
> The trailer is located at http://www.dvmemories.us/demos.htm
>
> Thanks,
> Eric
>
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"Mack" <ICH0R0426 DeleteThis @hotmail.com> wrote in message
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> If the purpose of this video is to bore the viewer to death, you've done
> well. If you're trying to sell something, make it less than 1 minute, and
> cut out that 2 minute still photo of the poster at the beginning. You need
> to learn how to compose a video, dude. You've managed to make a dynamic
> event into something boring.
>
And who says that don't take skills!
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Mack, thanks for your opinion. Its great that everybody has one. The
gym owner who requested the video, specified 5 minutes, and also wanted
mixed still shots and posing shots,; and the poster at the beginning
gives the details of the actual event. Those are the specs that I had
to work from. Any other specific tips, in relation to these specs and
what an expert like you would do, would be swell.
I appreciate your feedback.

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